Film production mark

Film production mark after moderation is 36. The title of your film is great, but then the titles don't continue - you need titles for actors, editor, producer, director (in this order). You could also use music in the background to create suspense. Fiddling with these two aspects could improve your mark.

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The title of the film
In the opening scene it is showing a bold 
Costume and Props
Costume is considered to help represent the person however are characters are dressed to look like normal people. This was to make it seem slightly confusing to the audience, why they would meet and make an exchange in a random location. However, Ed Harrington has his hood up to represent that he is the thug and more suspicious than Ryan. In image 6/3 (depending the way you look at the scrrenshots) You can see Aaron approaching at a high level In a suit, this tells us that he has strong dominace and that he is looks rich and powerful. Due to this actor being rich and powerful this allows the audience to indentify with the



Camera and Editing
In Image one, this is a good shot as it shows the exchange of two valuable items to the characters. This is portrayed by using a two person shot of Ryan Eastman and Edward Harrington with a mid-level view. This scene was shot next to dark bridge in an rural area excluding any publicity, this help set the scene that this exchange of items has been set up privately and can be illegal.

Original Film